Explanation Text Guidelines
Topic : Why does your computer need to upgrade?
General statement
Computer
is an electronic device that can manipulate information or data. Upgrading the computer
is a must to do to get better experience of using computer.
Process
Topic
sentence 1:
Technology
requirement and user requirement always increase from time by time. Therefore,
technology that has owned by user need to be upgraded in order to complete task
quickly. Computer is one of the most used technology in this time. Computer
take a command from user, processing it, and show the output to user by
monitor.
User input command(source:Udraw.co) |
processing command & data (source :Udraw.co) |
Output showed at monitor (Source:Udraw.co) |
That
means if user want to get better performance on his computer, user should
upgrade their computer to get better experience of using computer. There are
components in the computer: processor, motherboard, VGA, Hard disk, RAM, PSU ,Fan
,and case.
Topic
sentence 2:
I would give one example for explain
that upgrading component computer is an important thing for user to do. User
has a computer with specification is processor intel dual core. In other side,
software in this year require processor intel core i5 to run the program. User
can run the software with his computer but, there’s a risk if user keep using
his intel dual core processor in the computer, The risk are :
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The
processor can be damaged
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The
performance of processor can be decreases.
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The
temperature of computer will be warm or it can be overheat
So, to avoiding the risk, user should upgrade his processor to intel core i5 or higher due to run the software. Also another component need to upgrade too because the performance for each component must be balance because if the performance is not balance, sure the performance of each component wont work 100%.
Conclusion
The limit we can keep using the component
computer is about 3-4 years. If we keep using the component beyond limit, the
computer performance might be slow and it can causes more problems.
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