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Topic  : Why does your computer need to upgrade?

General statement

Computer is an electronic device that can manipulate information or data. Upgrading the computer is a must to do to get better experience of using computer.


Process

Topic sentence 1:

Technology requirement and user requirement always increase from time by time. Therefore, technology that has owned by user need to be upgraded in order to complete task quickly. Computer is one of the most used technology in this time. Computer take a command from user, processing it, and show the output to user by monitor.

User input command(source:Udraw.co)


processing command & data (source :Udraw.co)


Output showed at monitor (Source:Udraw.co)

That means if user want to get better performance on his computer, user should upgrade their computer to get better experience of using computer. There are components in the computer: processor, motherboard, VGA, Hard disk, RAM, PSU ,Fan ,and case.

Topic sentence 2:

I would give one example for explain that upgrading component computer is an important thing for user to do. User has a computer with specification is processor intel dual core. In other side, software in this year require processor intel core i5 to run the program. User can run the software with his computer but, there’s a risk if user keep using his intel dual core processor in the computer, The risk are :

-      The processor can be damaged

-      The performance of processor can be decreases.

-      The temperature of computer will be warm or it can be overheat

So, to avoiding the risk, user should upgrade his processor to intel core i5 or higher due to run the software. Also another component need to upgrade too because the performance for each component must be balance because if the performance is not balance, sure the performance of each component wont work 100%.


Conclusion

The limit we can keep using the component computer is about 3-4 years. If we keep using the component beyond limit, the computer performance might be slow and it can causes more problems.

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